woke up in san francisco
woke up in someone else’s skin
in someone else’s bed
in the driver’s seat of someone else’s car
woke up skinnier and emptier
in a good way
woke up ready to be filled
by the thicker air
and the resonance of wind chimes
woke up saturated in happy
woke up dizzy-eyed
and sore headed
woke up wanted to dream in the daylight
woke up wandering aimlessly
through a life i couldn’t afford
woke up in luke warm water
in someone else’s bathtub
woke up with a briefcase
filled with hotel soaps
and shampoos and lotions
stolen white towels
covered with the resin
of the disoriented people
who came before me
woke up in a high rise apartment
with wooden floors
and the 75 mph highway wind
out the window
like a portrait of a world waiting
or a pending suicide
woke up in an elevator
hung over
at the feet of shiny shoes
and muffled voices
the dinging of numbers
the echoes of morning lovers
down the hallway
woke up in san francisco
but i’m still dreaming of denver
woke up in san francisco
without a hangover
or a missed phone call
without a drop of seratonin
out of place
woke up in san francisco
only to fall asleep
in the arms of a woman
who doesn’t know me
who could never commit to me
well
who i could never commit to
COPYRIGHT BRICE MAIURRO 2012
Liked this a lot. I think you could’ve ended it without the last three lines and it would have worked, but figure you had something personal to say there.
I struggled with the ending. I think the fact you noticed says I should rethink it a bit. Thanks for the feedback, Trent.
I like this a lot too Brice. It’s got that moving feeling of the great tradition of American traveling songs.
Thanks. I love American travel songs, so I’m happy to hear that!
Yep, you definitely put music in my head there…
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I really like the descriptiveness of your poetry
I like the last 3 lines, Brice, in fact they struck me as being just right when I initially read it. I love the story line and the expression of it. Thanks.
Thanks, Paul!